feature peer review. (late)

Kyle strusz's feature:
1. What are some areas that could use more detail? Why?
Who are your favorites and why do you watch.
2. What additional sources might the author use? Does the lead involve you in the story?
Ask some other people why they like golf, the lead does involve you in the story quite a bit.
3. Does the story contain a well defined scene (a detailed description of someone doing something or something happening)? What is it? If not, make a suggestion for a scene that might work.
Yes, very well described sceanes of the masters tournement.
4. What would you like to see or hear more of? Less of? Include, any other suggestions you have for improvement.
More about the different tournements, otherwise it was a great feature story.